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Whats the Melody Like
Too repetetive
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
You aint' no singer Mel!
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
Crap, I can't believe I listened in the first place!
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
OK, but needs a major overhaul
16%
 16%  [ 2 ]
Good, I would listen again
25%
 25%  [ 3 ]
Excellent, way to go!
58%
 58%  [ 7 ]
Total Votes : 12

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melons
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Audio Song

Ok, well I wrote a song and I also wrote the melody.

For your sins on melswebs you now have to suffer listening to me sing it while I have the remainder of a cold Shocked

I would like to have honest feedback on the melody please...is it:

I added these as a poll...

too repetetive,
You aint' no singer Mel!
Crap, I can't believe I listened in the first place
OK, but needs a major overhaul
Good, I would listen again
Excellent, way to go



http://www.melswebs.com/star%20riders.mp3

Thanks in advance.....this new gadget is fun Smile

Mel Cool

Post Fri Nov 11, 2005 11:39 pm 
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cmichelle1119



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(((Mel)))

You go girl...this is awesome and I am glad you worked up the courage to post it...Such a sweetie!!!! Wink

Hugs~
Mich

Post Sat Nov 12, 2005 1:34 am 
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cupcakes



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I think it's sweet. and ur voice is sexy and u're very brit.

It's was a lot better than I expected. I was the percussionist for a shitty band a few months ago. u're definatly better than we were. Song writing is hard. I spent hrs and hrs on lyrics and stuff...so difficult.

good job. Wink

~cupcakes

Post Sat Nov 12, 2005 9:25 am 
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Eilidh
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This is good, Mel. I would like to hear it again when you are over your cold. I think it would sound even better as an SATB arrangement. There are places where another voice or an instrument would add to the fullness of the whole tune. Just out of curiosity, what recording software are you using?

Post Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:35 pm 
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Phoenix
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great song Mel, it would be great to hear it with the music you have imagined playing.

hugs,

brat
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Post Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:41 pm 
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it was good Mel... you sang certain parts a little too quickly but i'm willing to bet nerves had something to do with that... and i agree with Brat... would be nice to hear an instrumental accompaniment.... when you gonna stuff a band in here?
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Post Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:52 pm 
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melons
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quote:
Originally posted by cmichelle1119:
(((Mel)))

You go girl...this is awesome and I am glad you worked up the courage to post it...Such a sweetie!!!! Wink

Hugs~
Mich
Hey Mich Smile

it took a lot of nerve to post this. I think you can tell I was nervous. At least I can say I wrote the lyrics and the score Wink ...never done that before.

Hugs,

Mel xx

Post Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:00 pm 
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melons
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quote:
Originally posted by cupcakes:
I think it's sweet. and ur voice is sexy and u're very brit.

It's was a lot better than I expected. I was the percussionist for a shitty band a few months ago. u're definatly better than we were. Song writing is hard. I spent hrs and hrs on lyrics and stuff...so difficult.

good job. Wink

~cupcakes
Hi Cupcakes Smile

I don't really write any songs, it kind of shows I think. This was a special write for me to do, very close to my heart....so I really, really tried. It definitely needs some music to go with it and a far stronger singer than I am. Thanks for taking the time to come and comment though Smile

Hugs,

Mel xx

Post Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:02 pm 
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Mairi bheag



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Very promising, Mel.

Mb
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