To hear her is to see her...To see her is to feel her
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NIC
Joined: 15 Aug 2005
Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY
To hear her is to see her...To see her is to feel her
Somehow all of my dreams.
Have embodied
You and Me
Now Now sista
Don't you cry.
Iam hear
At Your Side
No illusion
It's all my stakes
No confusion
is all......
it
takes.
Just don't ask why.
I said
Don't ask why.
I look into those eyes
Seen
all the sorrow
and
felt all the cries.
Now I know.
Theres a place
where you belong.
In my heart
sang in song.
You bring me to a place
Just one look of that
Sweet
Sweet
Face.
Now
Just Dont ask why.
No..... No......
Don't ask why.
I will
Bathe in your emotions.
I will
Feel the sweat
in your hair.
Tell me sista
Why's it so easy
Just so easy
To care.
Any place you wanna go
I will take
You there.
I will take you there.
Now..Now
Dont ask why.
No..... No......
Don't ask why.
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Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:35 pm
Mystic
Joined: 23 Oct 2006
Posts: 194
that's beautiful.
thanks for sharing.
mystic
Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:33 am
ghost
Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Posts: 2828
Location: MIA
lovely poem...
but ummm i think you ladies perhaps forgot this section is for
discussing
published poets
... in the real world that is.
please post your poems in the Poetry board? you can find it by clicking on the P in the circle at the top of the page, just under the pics.
thanks for sharing!
regards
ghost[/b] _________________
MIA
Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:13 am
NIC
Joined: 15 Aug 2005
Posts: 141
Location: Brooklyn NY
Um..........I am puiblished madam
I write lyrics for alot of bands so is this ok now?
lol
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Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:14 pm
fortheloveofagood... Site Admin
Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 2216
Location: loves land of plenty
Hi Nic,
What Ghost is saying is that if you want to discuss poetry or poets, or specific published poems, this is the thread to do it in. Crit lit, or simply say hey, this poem is great - because, etc.
If you want to post your own poems, published or otherwise to receive comments, or get feedback, then do so in the poetry section of the board.
The board is split into "General", "Stories" and "Poetry". Obviously having a poetry writers and styles under general may appear to mislead, but it is there to keep the discussion separate from the poetry.
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