Crap, I can't believe I listened in the first place!
0%
[ 0 ]
OK, but needs a major overhaul
16%
[ 2 ]
Good, I would listen again
25%
[ 3 ]
Excellent, way to go!
58%
[ 7 ]
Total Votes : 12
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melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
Audio Song
Ok, well I wrote a song and I also wrote the melody.
For your sins on melswebs you now have to suffer listening to me sing it while I have the remainder of a cold
I would like to have honest feedback on the melody please...is it:
I added these as a poll...
too repetetive,
You aint' no singer Mel!
Crap, I can't believe I listened in the first place
OK, but needs a major overhaul
Good, I would listen again
Excellent, way to go
You go girl...this is awesome and I am glad you worked up the courage to post it...Such a sweetie!!!!
Hugs~
Mich
Sat Nov 12, 2005 1:34 am
cupcakes
Joined: 18 Sep 2005
Posts: 324
Location: NY
I think it's sweet. and ur voice is sexy and u're very brit.
It's was a lot better than I expected. I was the percussionist for a shitty band a few months ago. u're definatly better than we were. Song writing is hard. I spent hrs and hrs on lyrics and stuff...so difficult.
good job.
~cupcakes
Sat Nov 12, 2005 9:25 am
Eilidh Moderators
Joined: 09 Apr 2005
Posts: 1880
This is good, Mel. I would like to hear it again when you are over your cold. I think it would sound even better as an SATB arrangement. There are places where another voice or an instrument would add to the fullness of the whole tune. Just out of curiosity, what recording software are you using?
Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:35 pm
Phoenix Moderators
Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Posts: 1664
Location: Tallahassee Florida
great song Mel, it would be great to hear it with the music you have imagined playing.
hugs,
brat _________________ "A little work won't hurt you bad, but just in case I'm wrong, you'll be smiling when they pronounce you dead." Amanda Marshall 'This could take all night
Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:41 pm
Cavewoman
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Posts: 2056
Location: nearby
it was good Mel... you sang certain parts a little too quickly but i'm willing to bet nerves had something to do with that... and i agree with Brat... would be nice to hear an instrumental accompaniment.... when you gonna stuff a band in here? _________________ " The sorcerers in life are created within each of us" --- Lynn V. Andrews
Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:52 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
quote:Originally posted by cmichelle1119:
(((Mel)))
You go girl...this is awesome and I am glad you worked up the courage to post it...Such a sweetie!!!!
Hugs~
Mich
Hey Mich
it took a lot of nerve to post this. I think you can tell I was nervous. At least I can say I wrote the lyrics and the score ...never done that before.
Hugs,
Mel xx
Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:00 pm
melons Site Admin
Joined: 06 Feb 2004
Posts: 2371
quote:Originally posted by cupcakes:
I think it's sweet. and ur voice is sexy and u're very brit.
It's was a lot better than I expected. I was the percussionist for a shitty band a few months ago. u're definatly better than we were. Song writing is hard. I spent hrs and hrs on lyrics and stuff...so difficult.
good job.
~cupcakes
Hi Cupcakes
I don't really write any songs, it kind of shows I think. This was a special write for me to do, very close to my heart....so I really, really tried. It definitely needs some music to go with it and a far stronger singer than I am. Thanks for taking the time to come and comment though
Hugs,
Mel xx
Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:02 pm
Mairi bheag
Joined: 04 Mar 2005
Posts: 5094
Location: Scotland
Very promising, Mel.
Mb
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